Thursday, October 22, 2009

Round Trip

(Preliminary Notes:

Final submission to Fiction Workshop 1 although I changed the title of my submission to 'Siquijor'. 'Round Trip' is the original title anyways. Starting from the original Billie Jean story and morphed into an entirely different story altogether, i therefore christen myself the mighty morphin' story maker - haha ang lame!

To be brutally frank I am not fully satisfied with my recent body of work, in terms of theme and especially my writing style. I often complain that I was a much better writer years ago. Still, for what it's worth, I was finally disciplined - more or less - into not just writing, but trying to understand how the different aspects of a story work. This is a rough draft of what I intend to write and work on in the future, I am always happy to say that everything is a work in progress. :D )

“Where are the witches and aswang on this island?” Myra asked, once again, of the lone waitress in the Garden Plaza Inn. It was her third night, alone, and she preferred talking to someone than holing up in her room. She was the inn’s sole occupant. The inn was more of an apartment with a few air-conditioned rooms turned out for guests. Restless ones like her fought off boredom with a few drinks at the beer garden below the apartments.

Lena, the young waitress, smiled and shook her head. Lena must be used to so many nosy and pointless questions from tourists, she realized.

“We only have gayuma here,” Lena giggled. Myra laughed with her. She knew that after a day or two, Lena would open up and confess that an ermitanyo lived high up in the mountains, and that yes, aswang and mambabarang lived on the island.

Still, Myra enjoyed the predictability of their exchange. If Lena remembered her, she didn’t let on.

“Maybe she really doesn’t remember me anymore. It was a year ago. Anyway, I’m ten pounds heavier and I have a few grey hairs now,” Myra mused, a little ruefully, to herself.

She remembered that Rey was waiting for her call. He was furious when she told him she was leaving for Siquijor, but there was little he could do to change her mind.

“I’m afraid she’ll have a nervous breakdown if I didn’t let her go,” she imagined her mother saying to him. Myra knew the two talked about her behind her back - her mother liked him and sought his opinion on things. Perhaps, after talking to her mother, Rey reluctantly conceded that maybe it was for the best that she went to Siquijor.

She picked up her phone and dialed his number. He answered after several rings.

“Sorry, I was in the bathroom,” he said. His tone was gentle and conciliatory. She imagined him leaning forward to turn down the volume on the CD player sitting on his desk.

“It’s alright, I just wanted to check on you, that’s all. How’s work?” She coughed. Her voice was a little husky after the cigarette she just smoked. She was relieved Rey did not notice, or if he did, he did not comment about it.

Myra heard papers rustling. “Swamped, as usual. My wonderful boss keeps giving me work to do just before I’m ready to go home - all urgent pleadings, too! I just got home, in fact. How are you?”

“I’m fine. I’m trying to study, if that makes you feel better,” she growled teasingly.

“That’s the spirit!” He said enthusiastically. “You’re coming back tomorrow, right? I could pick you up at the airport.”

She hesitated before answering. “Oh, I might have to delay my flight a bit. I think I want to go around the island some more. I’ll stay just a little longer, maybe two or three more days.”

The rustling stopped. “Myra, you don’t have much time left for review. It’s June already and you should be -”

She sighed. “I know. It’s just that I’ve been studying nonstop since the results came out. A few days away from it won’t hurt. There’s just something that I need to take care of, and then I’ll come home as soon as I can.” Myra said firmly. Rey dropped the subject.

The conversation shifted to a more familiar terrain - speculating about who would be the Bar examiners for her batch, gossiping about their former classmates and making jokes about unfinished readings. By the time she hung up the phone, the tension between them had dissipated and the mood was a little lighter.

Still, Rey’s words rankled her.

She asked Lena to bring her another beer and an ashtray. As soon as Lena reappeared and set down her order, Myra resumed their conversation.

“I found something on the beach. To whom should I give it?” She said lightly. Myra opened her bag and took out a small velvet pouch. She took out a ring and handed it to Lena. The ring was made of gold, with a square-cut ruby in the center.

Lena’s easy smile faded. Myra was suddenly afraid of the slight, young woman.

“I told you to put it back where you found it. It belongs to no one living or dead; the sea has claimed it for herself. Why did you bring it to Manila?” She nearly shouted, her voice suddenly sharp and clear.

“Wait - you remember me?” Myra said, surprised.

“Of course I do. This is a small island. You were with your friends here last year. You came here looking for aswang and gayuma thinking it’s a game. I’ve lived here all my life and I have seen disturbing things you cannot begin to imagine. There are those who stay for a few days and never leave. Over time, it seems that the island erases their memories. It’s unnatural.”

Myra was silent. She studied Lena’s face closely. Lena was genuinely upset. She wasn’t making it up. A cold, dull feeling swept over Myra.

“Our elders tell us that the sea is very playful and treacherous. She tempts outsiders with beautiful objects, and plays with their minds. Tell me, did you put this on?” Lena asked her warily.

“Yes, I - I tried it - just once. It fit perfectly. But I have never - ” Myra nearly knocked over her glass of beer, and droplets sputtered on the tablecloth. She massaged her forehead with the other head. She looked at Lena, who shook her head helplessly. Lena silently collected the empty beer bottle in front of her and left her. The string of multi-colored lights around the trees in the garden blinked ominously.

Myra closed her eyes, trying to blot out the images - laughing with Gina and Debbie and making plans for the future after the Bar, arguing with Rey before they left because he didn’t want her to “tempt fate” by having an early celebration.

“It’s a bad idea. You girls should be starting the review as soon as you can. Sometimes I don’t understand why you go along with their crazy ideas. You don’t even know anyone there. People will think you’re a group of girls looking for a ‘good time.’ I’m sure the white guys will have a field day with you.” He said sourly.

“For your information, it’s as much my idea as it is theirs. Why don’t you join us kasi? We’d love to have you with us and scare away the big bad white men who’ll try to hit on us,” Myra answered teasingly.

“I don’t have the time or money to burn like you girls. You know that. Just don’t blame me if something bad happens to you.” Rey muttered. Myra rolled her eyes.

Debbie and Gina laughed when Myra told them how annoyed Rey was they were going.

“He’s such a worrywart,” Debbie rolled her eyes. “We’re not some ditzy party girls gone wild. We’re lawyers-in-the-making-and-for-the-taking, for crying out loud. And Myra, you’re a Bar bet, too!”

“Yeah, you were such a nerd in law school. You and Rey both!” Gina said gleefully, crossing her eyes and sticking her tongue out at Myra.

“He is, but I’m not! Do I look like a nerd?” Myra giggled.

Debbie shrugged. “Besides, when will we have time to do this? Right after the Bar, we’ll be too busy job hunting and then we’ll be sucked into the toxic firm life. No more time for misadventures.”

They chose Siquijor because of the myths and rumors about witchcraft and monsters that shrouded the island in mystery. They were looking for adventure, hoping to meet a real ermitanyo or possibly encounter an aswang. Debbie’s helper who was from Dumaguete had nothing but stories to tell about how dangerous and terrifying Siquijor was.

There was a woman who suffered a curse from a mambabarang, and people said she literally turned into a living corpse - maggots ate away at her body for three years until she died and was spared of any more suffering. There were akit stories as well - men and women who are thoroughly enchanted by the island that they are unable to leave it. Some claimed that most of the locals practiced witchcraft and kulam, and it was fatal for anyone to cross them. The more Debbie relayed her helper’s fantastic tales, the more intrigued Myra and Gina were.

As soon as they graduated, they hopped on a plane to Dumaguete and stayed for a few hours in the quaint university town before going by ferry to Larena City in Siquijor.

What a beautiful place the island turned out to be. Their tour guide proudly told them about Siquijor’s history - the “Island of Fire” as it was once called by the conquistadors because of the swarm of fireflies on the island. It was still largely untouched by the rampant commercialization that corrupted other coastal regions, and its inhabitants enjoyed the same way of life they were accustomed to. The island was sparsely populated and remained largely unchanged, save for a cluster of foreigners who decided to stay in the island for good. The sea found its way to the old churches, whose tiles were made of shipyard lumber and sea bricks.

The expats they met adopted the ways of the islanders, relishing their privacy and isolation and the pristine, white sand beaches they visited were too tranquil for three laughing young women.

It was at the Salagdoong beach where Myra found the ring. Debbie and Gina had gone up the tiny cliff that jutted out over the water, taking pictures of the breathtaking view. Myra yelled at them to take her picture. She waded into the water and stepped on a small metallic object hidden among the crushed corals and seashells. She picked it up, wetting her clothes.

“Check it out!” she shouted, and held up the ring. Debbie and Gina quickly ran down to rejoin her.

“It looks real. How many carats, I wonder.” Myra said. She put it on. It fit her ring finger perfectly.

“Myra!” Debbie shrieked.

“What’s gotten into you? Take it off! Hay naku, didn’t anyone ever tell you it’s bad manners to wear somebody else’s ring? For all we know, that ring belongs to a dead woman.” Gina said crossly.

“I just wanted to try it on,” Myra replied in a wounded tone. She twisted the band around her finger and removed it.

“I know it’s a lovely ring, but it’s a little creepy, Myra. Why don’t you just put it back?” Debbie suggested anxiously.

Gina nodded in agreement. “She’s right. What is a ruby ring doing on a tiny isolated beach? I don’t see anyone else here besides us and a few locals. My hairs are standing on end! Do what Debbie says. Can’t afford to have bad karma now.”

“Let’s just give the ring to the proper authorities. Who knows, someone might be looking for it right now,” Myra insisted, ignoring their protests.

The jovial mood that marked their Siquijor adventure was slightly subdued on the ride back to the Garden Plaza Inn in Larena city.

In the vehicle, they spent a good half hour arguing about what to do with the ring.

“Under the law, you’re required to bring it to the municipality yada yada yada.” Gina grumbled.

“Well, it’s too late to take it to the barangay now. It’s early evening already. Let’s just drop it off at the Larena police station tomorrow if we have time and tell them we found it in Salagdoong.” Myra replied, irritably.

“Or why don’t you leave it with the waitress?” Gina suggested and beckoned the waitress to come over.

Before Myra could protest, the young woman named Lena was already at their table.

“We found a ring at Salagdoong beach this afternoon, but I don’t think we have time to take it to the barangay there. We’re going back to Manila tomorrow, you see. Can you keep it in the meantime and just contact the people in Salagdoong for us?” Debbie asked, ignoring the dirty look Myra shot her.

Lena shook her head.

“I can’t keep it for you. It will bring me misfortune if I do.”

“What do you mean?” Debbie asked, now thoroughly alarmed.

“Just put it back where you found it.” She answered and quickly left their table.

Myra laughed at the fearful expression on Debbie’s face. “The Siquijor stories have gone to your head. She’s just afraid of being accused of stealing. Pleas, let’s stop talking about it already. The ring will just spoil our vacation. I’ll take care of it tomorrow on our way to the airport.”

They overslept the next morning and in their rush, Myra forgot to return the ring anyway.

Back home, she tried not to think about what Gina said. The thought of a dead person wearing the ring was unsettling. She tried to shut out images of a young woman, perhaps not much older than herself, floating in the sea. She consoled herself by imagining that the poor woman must have dropped it into the water and had no way of getting it back.

The vacation was, as they envisioned, was a temporary escape before the drudgery of review. As soon as they returned, they had voluminous readings and long study hours to contend with. The girls went their separate ways, promising to reunite once the exams were over.

Rey and Myra had enrolled in a review center together for the daily lectures and spent the rest of their time studying separately, only meeting for dinner on weekends. People always warned them about “heightened emotional states” during Bar review, which proved to be make or break for most couples out of law school. They needed to minimize distractions, and neither wanted to get into fights because of unfinished readings.

While Myra excelled in law school compared to Rey or her best friends, the enormous pressure was starting to wear her down. Everyone was expecting her not only to pass, but also to top the examinations. Everyone - from obscure distant relatives she barely knew to her former professors in law school. Rey, on the other hand, was driven to be the ‘dark horse’ of their batch, hoping to make it to the Top Ten.

“How are you getting along in Poli?” He asked. “Did you get the sample Q&A I emailed you? Rumors are going around that there’ll be a lot of questions in election law this year.”

“I’m screwed! I always fall asleep trying to understand it. It’s the next best thing to a sleeping pill, if you ask me.” Myra joked.

“Force yourself. Start tonight. We only have two weeks left, then it’ll be -”

“The Bar.” Myra said in a mock serious voice. “Don’t worry, I haven’t forgotten... though my latest batch of nightmares would have me believe otherwise. By the way, a friend of a friend passed on some reviewers and lecture notes by Aruahe today. Just pick them up at my house and photocopy them if you like. Anyway, I’m exhausted already. I’ve been studying the whole day and I want to wrap it up. I’ll check out the Q&A you emailed me, if I still have some energy left. If I fall asleep, well, there’s always tomorrow.”

“Don’t try, just do it.” Rey said, a note of exasperation creeping into his voice.

“You forget, Rey, that I graduated with honors. Of course I know my election law, I was just teasing you!” Myra said it lightly, but her voice betrayed a hint of impatience. Bragging about her grades was uncharacteristic of her, but she wanted to make a point.

“Well, if you’re just studying to pass the Bar, then that’s well and good. It just worries me that you don’t seem to be trying hard enough to make it to the Top Ten. Wasting precious time in Siquijor --” Rey answered defensively.

“I’m glad we went to Siquijor - memories of our adventure are keeping my sanity intact. Otherwise, the review will just drive me nuts. At this point, I just want to get it over with and pass. If by some stroke of luck I top the bar or something, then that’s a bonus.” Myra sighed.

Hours of studying and lectures defined the next few months. The days and nights blended into each other until it was difficult to keep track of time. September came. Suddenly there wasn’t enough time, and Myra found herself in a long queue with fellow Bar aspirants outside De La Salle, mumbling to herself and trying to recall all that she studied. The month-long battery of exams was physically, mentally and emotionally draining, but she barely had time to rest before starting work. Myra was one of the select few invited to work with Licauco, the top law firm in the country. She rationalized that Siquijor was, indeed, an early reward for her efforts. As Debbie and Gina correctly predicted, after the exams there would only be work, work and more work waiting for them.

More than the hefty signing bonus and the salary, Myra enjoyed the perks of working with the country’s top legal minds. She enjoyed it so much that she sometimes forgot she was still underbar and waiting for the results. Certainly the partners and associates didn’t treat her that way and already saw her as an equal.

Rey, on the other hand, was employed in a medium sized law firm in Ortigas. He vacillated between eagerness and envy whenever she told him about working in Licauco. Eventually they came to an agreement that after a year or two in his office, he would apply in Licauco and join her there.

“I wish things came so easily to me the way they do to you,” Rey sighed enviously.

“I earned it. I worked my butt off in law school,” Myra protested.

“So did I.” Rey replied stubbornly.

When the rumors gave way to more reliable news from friends who were working in the Supreme Court, she and Rey went on leave from work. They initially planned to hold a vigil outside the Supreme Court, but they later decided to wait for the news on TV with Myra’s mother at home.

They covered their eyes gamely while her mother shouted and squealed while the names were being flashed on the screen.

“Congratulations, Atty. Rey Santos!” her mother shouted with delight.

Rey whooped jubilantly and kissed Myra, who was crying and laughing at the same time. Not long after, his cell phone beeped continuously with the barrage of messages and calls from his family and friends.

“It’s too bad I didn’t make it to the Top Ten, but anyway, I’m happy to pass. I’ll just live vicariously off your fame and fortune,” he joked.

“Your turn!” Her heart pounded in anticipation.

Rey joined her mother in waiting for Myra’s name. He cheered when a familiar name flashed on the screen - a classmate of theirs, one of his brods, a friend from the province.

Myra felt Rey grip her hand tightly. Her eyes were still closed. After an awkward silence, her mother said she couldn’t find her name.

“I must have made a mistake, the TV flashed the names so fast,” her mother said apologetically.

Myra shook her head. She opened her eyes. The prolonged darkness made the ceiling light harsh and glaring to her. She fought back tears. She knew her name wasn’t on the list. Her phone was silent. It was impossible that no one would congratulate her if she passed. No one wanted to tell her the bad news, not even Debbie or Gina.

All those months of intense studying went to nothing. She did not want to face anyone - not her colleagues, not her mother, not her friends, not even Rey. She was the first and only one in their office who did not pass the Bar. Unlike other Bar bets who simply failed to live up to exceedingly high expectations, she did not even make enough to pass. She did not know how to explain it, even to herself.

She forced Rey to go out with his friends, while she locked herself up in her room. He and her mother knocked at the door repeatedly but she pretended to be asleep. She muffled her incessant sobbing with her pillow, letting the cool dark night wash over her. After a while, the room grew quiet at last, and Myra gave in to the exhaustion. She slept for more than twelve hours.

When she awoke, her mother had prepared lunch for her and acted as though nothing happened. After a day of staring into space and ignoring the food in front of her, Myra wrote and sent her resignation letter to the office with a heavy heart. She was too ashamed to deliver the letter herself and face them. One of the partners called her after a few days to say they were sorry she was leaving and wished her luck on her future endeavors. Thankfully, she managed to thank him before crying.

Sympathetic relatives and friends told her they were shocked that she didn’t pass. It was impossible, they cried indignantly. Most of them assured her that perhaps she was just unlucky that year, and surely she would pass on retake, and maybe even top the examinations.

“God definitely has better plans for you,” Debbie said, when they talked on the telephone.

Myra listened to the outpouring of sympathy from well-meaning friends but her mind was on other things. She was already going through the motions of review, but she had no idea where to begin picking up the pieces.

Rey wanted to thoroughly review and assess what went wrong with her overall performance, but Myra refused. He wanted her to recall her answers to each question to pinpoint where she made mistakes, but Myra was adamant that she answered most, if not all the questions correctly.

“If that’s true, then you should have been on that list.” Rey’s insistence and her refusal sparked heated arguments between them, and Rey told her she was too emotional.

“It was different when we did it in law school. Those were just exams, Rey. We’re talking about my life here,” Myra explained, close to tears. In the end, Rey stopped insisting but made it a point to check on her progress when they met on weekends. Despite his busy work schedule, he found time in between the demanding firm life and her.

She had a few months left until September.

There were days she only slept an hour or two. Sometimes, the numbing exhaustion made her angry and question why God had done this to her. She had difficulty talking about why she failed - she herself did not know how on earth it happened. She wasn’t just any examinee, she was among the top five in her batch and she was a Bar bet.

Thoughts of Siquijor returned and gnawed at her. Could she be a victim of a cosmic joke? People reverted to varying degrees of primitive belief come the Bar examinations. Atheists found God; people prayed to ten different divinities for luck, and examinees generally avoided causing trouble or ill will to other people out of fear of inviting bad karma. How difficult was it to believe that she may have caused her own bad luck by taking a ring that did not belong to her?

The more she thought about it, the more convinced she was.

She took out the ring from its hiding place and studied it closely. The golden band lost its luster being hidden away in her closet and shone dully.

“If I had just listened to them, then none of this would have happened. I wouldn’t have failed the Bar.” She said to herself.

Early in June, she asked her mother for money to cover her plane fare and pocket money. Her mother refused several times, but Myra kept asking her every day until she relented. She knew in the end, her mother could not refuse her.

“Why don’t you wait til after the bar, maybe go on a holiday weekend together with the girls?” Her mother diplomatically suggested.

“They have work, Mom. I’d rather go by myself,” Myra insisted.

“Why do you need to go? Why now? Can’t you wait ‘til after! What if you fail again!” her mother cried, wringing her hands in frustration. Myra winced, but she held her ground.

“I just need to do this now. I just need to go for a few days and then I’ll be okay. I need to go. I have to get away from the pressure. Please.” Myra said with a startling urgency.

Her mother resignedly took out her checkbook and wrote out an amount to cover her plane fare and pocket expenses.

She left for Siquijor shortly after. Alone at last on the island, she felt at peace. She missed the tranquility of the island, of being just another traveler. People didn’t know her; she was just another girl from Manila to them. She relished the anonymity.

She was back in Larena. She spent the first few days of her stay just walking around, visiting the small shops that clustered around the city center. The locals waved cheerfully at her wherever she went and she smiled back.

“Contrary to people’s impressions of Siquijor, it’s not a terrifying place at all,” she said to herself and laughed at how she and the girls believed they were going to find an aswang or mangkukulam walking around in Larena.

She hired a private vehicle to take her around the island. She revisited the places she, Debbie and Gina loved. She returned to the convent in Lazi, and stopped by the San Isidro church that she loved. They spent hours gossiping and dreaming right at the very spot where she stood. She touched the sea and coral bricks and remembered how they made plans about putting up their own law office in five years. Debbie joked about finding The One first before starting on her five-year plan with them. They talked about love and relationships, and Gina joked that on so many levels, Myra was the only one among them with a bright and certain future ahead. She smiled at the recollection.

The driver offered to take a picture of her. She smiled and said she didn’t bring a camera. She would commit these images to her memory, she promised him, and the driver laughed.

She told him to take her to the Salagdoong beach shortly after.

Some of the locals at the beach told her she looked familiar to them, was she the young lawyer with her friends who went away before the Bar last year? She shook her head, smiled and said it wasn’t her.

The place was as beautiful as she had left it. She went up the small rocky cliff overlooking the water. The waves were gentle that day, and lapped at the rocky shore.

She was certain that the ring changed her future somehow, and forced her on a path she was not meant for. She opened her bag and took out the ring. All she had to do was put it back in the water, and then her life would go back to the way it was. It was that simple. She would pass the bar and she would become a lawyer just like she had always wanted.

She turned the ring over and over in her hand. She could throw it into the sea, and then forget. She closed her eyes and struggled to compose herself.

“Just put it back. Just put it back and things will go back to the way they should,” she told herself but she felt paralyzed.

Her hand closed over the ring even tighter.

“What if I return this ring, come home and still fail the Bar? I don’t think I can go through it a third time. I can’t. I can’t do it anymore. I don’t want to fail again.” She said to herself and began to cry.

At that moment, her phone rang. It was Rey and he was anxious.

“You haven’t called or texted in the last two days. Why are you still there? Your mom is worried sick about you. We thought something happened to you.”

“I’m fine.” She replied, her voice quavering.

Before Rey could respond, she continued. “Do you remember the ring I picked up on Salagdoong beach last year? I was supposed to return it before we went home. Anyway, I’m here now so I’m going to do just that. I feel kind of guilty, you know? It’s been a year. I should have done it sooner… You know what? I’m so happy here, I’m having such a lovely time. I wish you were here to see how beautiful it is,” she said wistfully.

Rey barely hid the anger and impatience in his voice. “You came all the way to Siquijor because of some ridiculous superstition? Oh God, I can’t believe this! Why didn’t I see it coming? Myra, you haven’t been yourself in a very long time. I know it hasn’t been easy for you. But to do this now, it’s just -- crazy and it’s irresponsible. Stop it. Stop making excuses. You can’t run away from this anymore. Do what you’re supposed to do and come home.”

“I should have passed. I should have had the life that I worked for. You make it sound so easy, like everything is a matter of will. There are things outside of your control, outside of my control. You don’t have to go through hell to do this again, but I have to --” she said defiantly, choking on her words.

“No, it is that easy. You keep making it more complicated than it is. All you have to do is let it go and forgive yourself.” Rey said, cutting her off.

He repeated it gently. “Just forgive yourself and let it go. You did your best. You know you did. Just come home and pick up where you left off. You’ll make it this time, I know it.”

Myra hung up the phone.

Gingerly she made her way down to the beach from the cliff. She waded into the water. There was nothing left for her to do in Siquijor.

She opened her hand and gently released the ring back into the sea.

Thursday, July 23, 2009

CW 210 - STORY DRAFT: Billie Jean (ver 1.0)

I didn't know yet whose story to tell, but I decided to write this for Fiction Workshop 1, which is partly based on a true story. I just finished it in time for class, so forgive the lapses I may have overlooked in my haste. The story itself is 15 pages long and I don't know how to "cut" it (whatever it's called) so that you just click on the link and be directed to the story itself. Please bear with the length and possible eyestrain as well. :)

BILLIE JEAN

They all loved Billie Jean back then, tried to copy MJ’s moves (everyone liked to call Michael Jackson “MJ” that time, as though they were on an intimate level with him – after all, he belonged to the world that time, cheeky tween to angry, gyrating adult), borrowed his bizarre fashion sense and watched in awe while he slid effortlessly across the stage while doing the Moonwalk. Amid the political tumult of the regime, everybody talked about MJ’s performance at the 25th anniversary of Motown, radios all over the city blasted his string of hits and Billie Jean was the rage of all Christmas parties, each one trying to outdo the other in executing the Moonwalk dance.

Rey Santos was a law student then, when MJ was taking the world by storm – a little shy, perpetually insecure among his wealthier, pedigreed classmates. He was rather short, and thin, his eyeglasses notoriously out of style. He scoured bookstores for cheap secondhand books that were severely outdated and difficult to reconcile with newer editions that his classmates sported. While they easily went out and bought the latest Michael Jackson album, he contented himself with listening to the radio and spirited debates on how amazing Thriller was, and how Billie Jean made pop history.

He thought of his wealthy classmates as arrogant snobs, who only had the good fortune of being born with money that masked their lack of intelligence. They were never mean to him – just a shade too patronizing, perhaps, taking in his slightly faded polo shirts that he always pressed and cleaned to look at least respectable (all in vain). They always made it a point to invite him to their parties, always last-minute invitations bordering on being an afterthought on their part. “We’re having a beer at so-and-so after Insurance class,” they said to him in forced casual tones, implying that he would, as expected, say no, because the couldn’t afford to waste time and money. “Oh, I already made plans with my girlfriend,” he offered as a convenient excuse, even when he didn’t have a girlfriend at the time. “Oh, that’s too bad, maybe next time, then,” they would answer a little quickly, a smile of collective relief ending the conversation.

He never earned their respect because he wasn’t the smartest in class, or the funniest, or even the best-looking. When called to recite, he never gave particularly memorable or insightful answers. He had his fair share of hits and misses, but even his hits were few and far between. He cowered easily once his professors arbitrarily asked him difficult questions, forgot the names and dates and legal concepts he memorized the night before. He was always doomed to answer badly. “Did you even bother to read the case?” he was asked often, sarcasm dripping from every word. Each time he nodded dumbly, resigned to his fate – a failing grade for the day. On good days, he simply received a nod of approval, nothing more. He hated his mediocre performance but did not cultivate friendships among his classmates to entitle him to complain and sigh like the rest. At the end of the day, school meant more books and more cases to read, more provisions to memorize without yielding better answers.

He envied his classmates who were children of lawyers, businessmen and politicians. At the start of every semester, Mr. David Ryan Buenafe was always asked about his relationship to the prominent Atty. Claudegildo Buenafe, former Secretary of Justice and current Presidential legal counsel. Deans lister Danny Jose, on the other hand, was simply going through law school for the purpose of attaching “Atty” to his name while waiting for his father’s congressional term limit to expire. Rich and happy-go-luck Ramon Arnaez once quipped famously in Constitutional Law class when he was asked why he chose law school over medicine (his parents were prominent doctors), “I went to law school to find me a beautiful and intelligent wife, only to find the beautiful girls were all in med school. Now it’s too late for me!”

As though a natural progression had always been in place, these prominent young men were the first to join fraternities, the automatic choice for class president and had internships at prestigious firms for the taking. His attractive female classmates always gravitated toward the likes of them – confident, easygoing and privileged. Achievers like Don Teves and Jose Madlangdiwa, on the other hand, had intellectual capital and political promise, and were next in line for access to crucial fraternity and professional networks. He envied their easy way in class, how they earned respect just by being themselves. They were invited to the exclusive gatherings of some of the professors, they organized the class parties and they practically ran student politics in the college.

In his early days as a freshman student, he was befriended by Tony Marquez, his classmate, a self-proclaimed champion of the Tondo slums. Tony caught up with him after Criminal Law class, just as he was quietly walking towards the jeepney stop.

“Pare, where do you live?” Tony asked him.

“Oh, a rented room over at Balut street,” he replied evasively.

“I’m just a few minutes away from your place then. Why don’t we commute together?” Tony suggested. “It’s been three weeks since the first day of school and what do you know? We’re practically neighbors.”

“But I’m not from Tondo, you know. I came from the province,” Rey said rather sullently, suddenly conscious that the frayed edges of his battered denims must have been obvious to everyone.

“But of course you are from the province,” Tony winked. “But you’ve got some Tondo blood in you now, just like me.”

They took a jeepney to Philcoa, a bus to Manila, and another jeepney to Tondo with Tony doing most of the talking throughout the fairly long but uneventful ride.

“Say, do you remember Gerry’s recitation in Crim last week? His analysis of the decision was all wrong, the RPC doesn’t apply because of the anti-fencing decree. Idiot. I suspect he did not even read the case and was bluffing the whole time. I wonder why Prof. Garcia didn’t call it. If I had half of his family’s money, I certainly wouldn’t waste it on nightly drinking sessions with my brods. Ah, but Prof. Garcia is his brod, too, how could I forget. Anyway, one day we will all be attorneys and therefore equal in the eyes of the law. One day we will be earning as much as Ryan’s father. Ha? Ha ha ha. Why don’t we stop for some lugaw at Manang Betty’s? Her place is on the way, anyway.” Without waiting for Rey’s reply, Tony hopped off the jeep and started walking toward Manang Betty’s Carienderya and Logawan.

Rey followed Tony resignedly. He became painfully aware of how easily he blended in his suroundings, unlike in school, where he stuck out like a sore thumb. The merienda for him was excruciating, cramped in the dingy carenderia with rowdy construction workers and tricycle drivers elbowing their way to the front table closest to the tv set. Tony, on the other hand, was comfortable in the place, he traded jokes with Manang Betty and flirted with her daughter, Bettina. “Atty. Tony, don’t forget us when you become rich and famous, ha. We might need your services!” Manang Betty trilled. He looked at Tony, who clearly relished the admiring glances from the construction workers and tricyle drivers who overheard the exchange. In the carinderia, Tony was the little god even strangers sought counsel with. After that “bonding session,” Rey studiously avoided going home with Tony and gradually Tony stopped inviting him to have lugaw at Manang Betty’s.

He didn’t know then how to wear his poverty as a badge of honor, to exoticize his provincial roots and tell them, “Look at me. Look at me,” the way Tony commanded the attention of his classmates. Tony enjoyed embellishing stories about life in Tondo, dramatizing for maximum effect, how dangerous and poor it was, with all the daily dose of crimes and shady dealings lurking in every populated corner.

Now and then, Tony would include Rey in his fictional world of murders and crimes, and would suddenly blurt out: “You know, Rey lives in Tondo, too. You tell them Rey,” but Rey would shake his head, mortified. The curious glances from his classmates, especially the female ones, would haunt him for days. On the other hand, Tony made his poverty attractive, his stories a novelty to some of his sheltered peers, and earned himself an invitation to the most prestigious fraternity, which he joined almost immediately.

Though he was never late for class and always looked decent enough, attended mandatory social gatherings such as the class Christmas parties, and his grades ranked somewhere in the middle of the batch, unlike Tony, he was never invited or considered for these exclusive groups.

Rey, like Tony, was the hope of his family, and monthly harvests subsidized his tuition and books, but he wanted no reminder of the doleouts. He was content to be invisible and to shuffle along with the mediocre ones.

His plain, cheap shirts and worn shoes didn’t stand out any more than his equally financially challenged peers, but he didn’t want to join their group either and be branded as the homogenous group desperate for stipends and scholarships. Tony didn’t need the scholarships anymore, he was climbing up the proverbial social ladder thanks to his newfound fraternal family. He started dating the pretty, wealthy girls in their batch, and not too long after, his colorful stories of Tondo became a historical footnote to his newfound identity.

Rey found himself a girlfriend in the second semester of his first year as a law student. Together with his hormonally charged classmates, he lusted over Lennie Chua, the prettiest girl in their class and the entire batch, who also happened to be very well-endowed. Although she tried her hardest to be appreciated for her intellect and not her breasts, even Lennie’s professors were often distracted by her dimples and curves. Just as he was mustering the courage and the finances to invite her to a movie, she was soon seen holding hands with Danny Jose, floating around the college. People in law school who pair up usually end up together for good, Rey rationalized.

Myra Generosa was a college junior then, majoring in education. She lived in the boardinghouse across his. She was fairly attractive then and wore her uniform with pride. Rey would watch her walking home alone, he noted, always at 6 pm, balancing books close to her breast. He thought to himself, well, she is a girl just like me, living in this hole, she’s in my league. He started visiting her at the boardinghouse with an acquired confidence that allowed him to make sharp pronouncements and long-winded explanations about law school, how difficult the law was and how knowledgeable he was compared to her.

He kept her away from the obligatory get-togethers, reasoning to himself that she would look unformed and pathetic compared to his sophisticated, self-assured female classmates. He imagined the easy conversations about this professor and that exam, and if Myra happened to mention that he got the highest score in class, or that he was among the top of his batch, then his cover would be simply blown. Miraculously, Tony did not say anything to him or their classmates about Myra. Perhaps Tony sympathized with him or even felt sorry for him. After all, he was dating above his station and from the looks of it, he was going to marry into middle class wealth, at the minimum.

He did not know then whether he really loved Myra, or whether he simply needed an emotional, physical and sexual outlet to help him cope with the pressures of law school. Maybe it was the torment of lusting after unavailable women, or maybe he needed a convenient excuse to shy away permanently from his classmates’ friendly overtures (sincere or otherwise).

Myra was devoted to him, she made him feel good about himself and she never complained or fussed over his busy schedule and the fact that she never met his friends or family in the province. He similarly cherished his unshakable sense of loyalty and fidelity to her and never doubted her love for a moment. They spent evenings in his room, studying, talking about the future, and making love. Six months later, Myra would become the perfect reason for him to put his studies on hold.

They were having a late dinner at Manang Betty’s. Myra’s hand crashed down on the bowl of lugaw in front of her, sending the contents of the bowl to the floor. “I’m sorry,” she mumbled, while Rey, a little annoyed, called Manang Betty’s daughter to mop up the mess. Myra saw Rey’s darkened look and she started to cry.

“I’m not myself. I haven’t been coming to school… My period hasn’t come. I think I’m pregnant. Do you hate me?” she sobbed.

Her words made him lightheaded. He gripped the edge of the table, wary that Myra would send it crashing down, too.

“We’ll get married, then.” He answered tonelessly.

“What about your studies?” she asked, toying with her spoon, tapping it against the empty bowl of lugaw.

He answered almost immediately, barely pausing for breath, his words collapsing into each other. “I can always come back when we have enough money saved. It’s a privilege, you know, for the top students in the batch. See, all I have to do is write them a letter, apologize for leaving the school temporarily, yes, that’s the word, while I see to our baby. It’s easy; it will take me five minutes. When we have enough money saved, I’ll finish my law degree.“

“What about my studies?” she whispered.

“Well, then, you should’ve done something to avoid this situation we’re in,” he muttered.

“Maybe I will do something about it,” she said, lifting her chin. She looked at him, and he never forgot that look. She seemed in possession of a great secret, the secret to his ruin.

“Maybe I will do something about it.” She repeated, a little more loudly. “Maybe I will leave you,” she said defiantly.

“Oh Myra,” he laughed. “You’re being ridiculous. Who will want you now?”

She never did leave him. They married quickly and with merely two witnesses in attendance, Myra’s sisters, dressed in formal clothes they occasionally used for relatives’ funerals. Rey did not inform his classmates. Tony only learned of the news when Rey and Myra moved to a slightly bigger room. Myra’s belly was swollen by then, and she looked tired of motherhood.

She gave birth to Ramir, their eldest, in a nameless room in a dingy public hospital, the first of many children.

In the end, Rey dropped out of law school during the second semester of his second year. He applied for paralegal work in small firms all over Manila, but none of them showed any interest in his earnest job application. “Your background in the law is not sufficient. You only have a few subjects to your credit,” they always told him, shaking their head and wishing him luck on his future endeavors. Meanwhile, the baby was growing and Myra needed an endless supply of milk, diapers, bottles and clothes. When he learned the college was putting up its own bookstore, he immediately applied for the position. He was still young then, and thought the job was respectable enough. Besides, he had nowhere else to go.

The college librarian interviewed him. She vaguely remembered him, the quiet boy in the corner, studying by himself. “Why do you want this job, Rey?”

“To earn for my family while I save enough money to go back to school,” he lied.

“Well, no one else wants this job, so I suppose you’ll do,” the librarian said and promptly stamped “received” on his job application.

Work meant the air-conditioned shoebox cramped with decaying academic journals published quarterly by the college, the grossly outdated textbooks churned out by long-dead professors and legal primers nobody touched. Barely a handful visited the bookstore on any given day and out of the casual lookers on, only one or two actually bought anything. Myra stayed home, brought up the children and for additional income, washed other people’s clothes until her hands cracked and became leathery.

Tony visited the bookstore once for materials while reviewing for the Bar examinations. He was surprised to see Rey there. So were their other classmates who occasionally dropped by sniffing for older but more reliable textbooks and review materials they might have missed. Through their brief exchanges, Rey pieced together what had become of his classmates. Ramon was delayed by a year. Lennie did not pass on her first try, as with David Ryan and even Tony. Soon the list of passers and examinees faded with time, until most of his batchmates moved on to mysterious careers that were invisible to him. As the books and journals went untouched and growing by the number, he patiently wrote an ambitious letter to the college dean proposing changes in the management of the bookstore. Rey anxiously anticipated a personal audience with him – after all, his letter was carefully written, its propositions well thought out and explained, a letter that begged a face-to-face meeting to discuss its contents – but the meeting never came. He received a perfunctory letter of thanks from the Dean, and the usual promise of discussing the proposal when more funds and manpower were available. The experience disappointed him, and evoked the days of being a student essentially invisible and useless. He decided to grow a moustache to look smarter, more finished, to be noticed.

He was five years late when he bought his first Michael Jackson tape with his holiday bonus. By then, democracy was in place; an era had ended. He had three mouths to feed, a bigger rent to pay, but his thriftiness paid off. A few stolen textbooks from the bookstore sold to law students boarding near their apartment helped pay some of the bills. Myra became as worn and shapeless as the clothes she washed, her hands smelling strongly of detergent soap. Rey made love to her the same way he always had, carelessly and quickly, until months after Ramir was born, Paolo followed, then Glenn and finally Mari Rose.

Going back to law school became Rey’s favorite topic of obsession. Alone in the bookstore most of the time, he played Thriller on heavy rotation, enjoying the respite from staring blankly at the walls. Once in a while, he pretended to be a returning student to the college, the prodigal soon welcomed back to the fold.

Every semester, he surreptitiously copied the class schedules posted on the corkboard, eavesdropping on conversations of students wondering which professor to take in which subject. He drew up his own class schedule, allotting time for the daily commute and study hours after work. He would be older than most of his classmates and he would be smarter. He had enough connections among the staff and acquaintances among the few professors who stopped by the bookstore to check on the books they themselves had published. Reviewing for the Bar and daydreaming about court appearances became his favorite pastime.

Over the years, he endured the polite greetings and falsely cheerful questions from his former classmates who popped up to buy a few academic journals here and there for the pleadings they needed to write. “So good to see you here,” they would invariably say, for lack of anything to prolong the awkward chitchat while he wrapped up the books and journals they purchased. He learned to wear an equally polite and cheerful expression on his face, asking a few questions about a common acquaintance, family, work, work and work. They tried telling him about the cases they were handling, but once they delved into the details, they stopped and remembered that Rey did not make it that far into their studies for him to relate to what they were saying. “Oh, it’s just a procedural issue, nothing important.” they often said vaguely, but Rey knew deep down it was what was important, the heart of the matter. Rey would pretend it was nothing, and that he understood anyway.

There was something in his manner of asking that always made his former classmates uneasy, even apologetic, and in the few forced conversations that occurred between them in the bookstore, they would always say: “You’re lucky you were smart enough to get out before the rest of us! Ha ha ha!” At end of each exchange, he would mull over the conversation – or the semblance of it, that transpired. What did they apologize for, really? What was there to apologize for? Sure, the women became less beautiful, crows feet showed around their eyes, and the men became fat and indolent. They all reeked of money and influence, saturating his tiny corner with their sporadic intrusions. What was so insufferable to them, really? He wondered. The cars, the successful careers, the private school reared children, the title next to the name?

At home, he rarely mentioned these occasional encounters to Myra. For the last twenty-five years over dinner, he always boasted to her that he was one of the best in his class, and only, if only he had the money to continue schooling, he would’ve made a great lawyer, too. “Watch me,” he said at the end of his occasional monologues. “I will be a lawyer just like I’ve always wanted.” His growing brood of children and captive audience simply listened to him, exchanging glances while toying with their half-finished food. Meanwhile, his paunch had grown and his hair thinned considerably. He still wore his moustache, wavy and thick, paired with his horn-rimmed glasses, to give off an aura of distinction.

Tony dropped by the bookstore once, accompanying his niece who was an incoming freshman. He was casually dressed in a short-sleeved polo shirt and slacks, exuding the confidence of a man secure in his wealth and success.

“Rey! Is that you? Pare, it’s so good to see you again!” Tony shook his hand vigorously.

“Tony, it’s been how many years since we saw each other last,” he said formally and briefly nodded to acknowledge Tony’s companion.

“Rey, this is my niece, Lyka. She graduated from MassComm last year and now she’s going to law school. She needs a couple of books. Lyka, this is my classmate from law school, Rey. O Rey, you give her a discount ha?” Tony winked.

Rey smiled stiffly. “Unfortunately, our dean is very kuripot and he does not give out discounts. I’m sorry, Lyka.”

Tony guffawed. “How come our college deans are always the kuripot, stuffy ones? It’s alright really, I’m sponsoring Lyka’s books, so I’ll even give you a little extra. In other words, keep the change.” He smiled and pressed on. “So where do you live now – still in Tondo? How’s Myra? How many kids do you have?”

“Well, we’re moving to a bigger house soon in Paco, maybe by the end of the year. Myra has a small business that is doing well. How about you, where do you live now? How is your wife?”

“We live in Makati, very near the office. Did I tell you I put up my own firm? The missus and I are running it with some of our classmates, mostly brods. It’s doing very well. In fact,” he whispered conspiratorially, “we are helping a certain high-profile bastard move his pile of money outside the country before the government finds out. He he he. Money’s good. You and Myra should visit us one of these days. Gina needs a secretary.” He took out a card from his wallet and handed it to Rey. “Just tell them you’re an old friend of Atty. Marquez, back in the day when he was still Tondo’s pride and hope.”

“Thank you, Tony. It’s good to see you Tony. It was nice meeting you, too, Lyka. I hope you enjoy your stay here at the college.” Rey bowed stiffly to the departing pair. He tore up Tony’s professional looking calling card with gusto and threw the pieces into the trash.

“I saw Tony today,” he said to Myra over dinner. “He’s an arrogant bastard now, you know. Well, come to think of it, he was always full of hot air, even when we were classmates. He actually had the nerve to ask me to talk to you and ask if you wanted to work as a secretary for his wife.”

“He’s just being kind, Rey.” Myra answered, a little exasperatedly. “Why don’t we accept his offer? We badly need the money, anyway. The kids are growing up and school is expensive.”

“We don’t need Tony’s doleout,” Rey spat out. “We are doing perfectly okay here. All I need is some more money then I can go back to law school.”

“Law school?” Myra laughed shrilly. “Please Rey, you’ve been talking about it for the last twenty years. You’ve been a few steps away from the college but you never even tried.”

“Do you think it’s easy? School costs a lot of money. Do you see the books I catalogue for the store? They’re worth at least –“

Myra stood up. “Spare me the drama, Rey, you don’t intend to return, and you never have. All you do is sit in the bookstore all day, playing your stupid tape over and over. I’ve never met your law school friends or colleagues from work. I used to believe you were ashamed of me, but over time I’ve come to realize you were just lying to me all along. Your own children laugh at you. They ask me, ‘Mama, why does Papa always say he’s going back to school? Isn’t he too old already?’ and I don’t know what to tell them. Maybe next time I’ll them how crazy and stupid you really are!”

It was the hand that struck her face that ended their marriage. The hand took on a life of its own and struck hard many times. There was a ringing in Rey’s ear while he stood there, wordless. Blood crept downwards to Myra’s swollen lips. Ramir, their eldest, crept outside and watched his mother, stunned, stumble to the sink and slowly and deliberately wash her face. Rey turned to his son, ashamed, and recognized the look on his face. Ramir inherited his mother’s contempt for him, that angry look when he blamed her for his own carelessness. He wanted to strike Ramir too, but Ramir ran off to wake his brothers and sisters, and they ran out of the house – Ramir in his finest moment, dragging his mother with him, and they ran all the way to the kapitan, Myra’s brother-in-law, and all the way to the police station where Myra reported to the sympathetic policeman that she was an abused woman that her husband became violent to her when she had done nothing but sacrifice for him, for the family.

An hour later, Ramir returned with the kapitan and his men, the tanod in tow. As soon as he opened the door, Rey babbled with various excuses – work was increasingly difficult, his wife was blaming him for things he was not accountable for, and that a man had the right to discipline a loudmouthed, ungrateful woman he provided for. The kapitan ignored his entreaties, simply answered, “We need to talk. Let’s go to your room.” They followed him to the master’s bedroom and advanced upon him without another word.

Ramir listened outside the door while he begged and begged for forgiveness and apologized many times over. The kapitan and his men were silent and only answered with blows. When they left, Rey looked at himself in the mirror, soiled with blood and bruises. He was alone.

The apartment was empty in the weeks and months that followed. Myra spirited off their conjugal possessions while he was at work, leaving him with his clothes, books, the broken tv, cassette player and loose change. He stopped playing Michael Jackson in the bookstore, and instead filled the empty apartment with the maniacal yelps of Thriller and Billie Jean. He bought MJ’s other albums, and occasionally listened to them for variety. He started buying magazines, too, that chronicled the bizarre exploits of “Wacko Jacko” and his descent into madness. “It’s a shame,” he said to Manang Betty, now graying and stooped. “He really was a great entertainer until he turned into a crazy white man.” Manang Betty nodded, pretending she understood. She had gotten used to him lingering in the carinderia, looking for someone to listen to him. She only heard about what happened to him and his wife, it was sad how their marriage turned out, she confided to her daughter.

“They say he was one of the brightest in his class, and if he had not stopped his studies to raise a family, he surely would have been a Bar topnotcher or something,” Manang Betty whispered to the Erning, the carpenter who was also a regular at her eatery.

“Why does he talk about Michael Jackson all the time?” Ernie asked, scratching his head. “I know he was really something back in the 80’s but no one really knows him now. He’s just a crazy rich man.”

“Nobody really understood MJ,” was now the standard way Rey began with his lectures about the life and times of Michael Jackson. He deftly parried assertions from his audience that MJ abused children, prurient stuff from the tabloids anyway – why, look at the Filipino couple who worked for his Neverland ranch, the children said. “They just took advantage of his kindness and money,” he replied angrily. At times, he introduced himself as the Filipino spokesperson for the MJ fan club. At work, he prepared numerous statements about the true nature of pedophilia, answered questions about MJ’s civil and criminal cases, and shouted for joy when the “Wacko Jacko” was finally acquitted of his criminal charges.

To inject more variety into his lectures, Rey made up his own dance routines and learned how to moonwalk. He used his savings to buy a DVD player and bought DVDs of Michael Jackson’s live concerts, rewinding and pausing endlessly, memorizing every step, every turn.

Rey understood the importance of maintaining illusions. He practiced his moonwalk routine, gliding forward while being pulled backward. There were many ways to moonwalk, but less ways to skin a cat, and he only knew one way, the Michael Jackson way. Every weekend for months on end, the house was crowded, the cheering people numbering thousands, arms outstretched as the legend defied gravity under the glare of the floodlights.

Rehearsals for his grand tour were underway, he needed to practice. He needed something better than a powerhouse performance, a move so amazing and unexpected that it would move his audience to tears and send thousands to their feet. He needed to defy gravity once more.

With Billie Jean at full blast, Rey made his way to the chair that was waiting for him, glowing and ethereal under the spotlight, confident in the illusion that the tricky dance step required. Up the chair and into the noose, make it tight, just a little tighter, then ready, kick back the chair and voila. Manang Betty will have something to talk about for weeks.

The house rocked with thunderous applause. The moment was as perfect and inspired as finding that turn of phrase to sum up an emotion, a moment, an originality that was effortless.

Tuesday, July 21, 2009

CW 250 - STORY DRAFT: Do Polar Bears Dream?


Super draft of a children's story envisioned to be the first story in the Poley Cub detective series. This draft will be subjected to a class workshop. Illustrations to follow.


(STORY DRAFT)

DO POLAR BEARS DREAM?

1

“Good morning, Little Poley Cub!” the little girl said.

To Little Poley Cub sitting on her bed.

“It’s a beautiful day today,

Let’s go out and play!”

“Good morning,” Little Poly Cub replied.

“Indeed the sun is so warm and bright.

I can tell today will be sunny and nice,

I’d love to play with you outside.”


“Papa’s home!” the little girl cried.

And she ran to meet him outside.

Little Poley Cub was so excited, too, he climbed up on the desk,

He knocked down the little girl’s phone and made a mess.

But when the little girl came back for him, he was back on the bed.

“What happened here?” she said.

Little Poley Cub replied, “I climbed up the desk.”

The little girl didn’t answer but she cleaned up the mess.

Papa called them again and they went outside,

Little Poley Cub saw how big he was and tried to hide.

Papa picked him up, so Little Poley Cub said hello,

But it was noisy outside and no one heard him anymore.


2


“Good afternoon, Little Poley Cub!”

“I’m so glad to be back home with you.

Meet Sufia, my new friend.

She lives just round the bend.

She’s a little girl just like me,

I’m in Grade One, but she’s in Grade Three.

I told her all about you.

I hope you’ll be good friends, too.”


Sufia said, “Oh, he’s a baby polar bear, how cute!

He’s smaller than the real polar bears I see in books.

Real polar bears live in the North Pole,

They love any place that’s very cold.

These days, polar bears are looking for a place to stay

Now that the earth is getting hotter everyday.”


“Good afternoon,” Little Poley Cub said.

“I’m a little bored, so I stayed all day in bed.

I waited for you all day,

So we can go out and play.

Hello Sufia, it’s very nice to meet you!

You know, I am a real polar bear too.

I know when the sun is warm and bright,

I know when the sky is dark and it is night.

I don’t know what hungry is or growing old,

I can live anywhere, hot or cold.”


Sufia and the little girl played the game of Pretend,

They made some snow for Little Poley Cub, their friend.

They tried to make him a house out of ice,

But Little Poley Cub got wet and Mama said it wasn’t nice.

Little Poley Cub piped up and said, “But I don’t mind!”

But Mama picked him up and took him outside to dry.

Little Poley Cub spent the rest of the afternoon outside,

And he saw Sufia later wave goodbye.


3


“Good evening, Little Poley Cub, did you miss me?”

Until it’s time to eat, Mama said we can watch tv,

Let’s watch Mr. Inspector Bear,

I have a little hat and coat for you to wear.

That way you’ll be all dressed up,

My very own Detective Little Poley Cub.

I know you can’t wait to see,

How Mr. Inspector Bear will solve his mystery.”


“But what is a mystery?”

Dressed up Detective Little Poley Cub said to the tv.

Mr. Inspector Bear on tv replied: “A mystery is a question,

Or it can be a problem looking for solutions.

To solve the mystery we must look at clues that will help us know,

Clues are little things that point us in a direction and tell us where to go.”

Little Poley Cub asked, “But what does a detective do?”

Mr. Inspector Bear answered, “A detective is very much like me and you,

A detective will look at and understand the clues.

A detective asks many questions,

A detective listens to suggestions.

A detective is always curious about the world,

Every bit of wisdom is as valuable as a pearl.

So boys and girls, come with me,

Let us solve yet another mystery!”


Mama called and said it was time for bed,

And when she said Little Poley Cub, this is what she said:

“Oh, the hat and coat look very nice and smart,

Little Poley Cub must be a detective at heart.”

That night, Little Poley Cub was very very happy.

He was a detective in search of a mystery.


4


“Good morning, Detective Little Poley Cub.

Mama’s here to give you a bath today.

It’s really very fun,

And it’s your very first one!

I’ll put you in soap and water, inside a tub

And then I’ll scrub, scrub, and scrub!

You’ll see the dirt and dust come out

Your fur will be white again, no doubt,

After I leave you out to hang and dry

On a day like this, out in the sunshine!”


Detective Little Poley Cub pondered,

“Why must I take a bath,” he wondered.

“Dirt and dust must be bad for me.

They are clues that help me solve this little mystery.

Dirt and dust are here inside the tub,

Soap will only work if I’m scrubbed.

The sun is warm and bright to help me dry,

The sun and water will make my fur white.”

While he was hung out to dry,

Detective Little Poley Cub was deep in thought the whole time.

He solved a little mystery that day,

Soon many more are to come his way.


5


“Good morning,” the little girl said,

Her eyes were puffy and red.

“Good morning,” said Little Poley Cub in a voice so clear,

But the little girl started to cry and she didn’t hear.

“Good morning,” said Little Poley Cub again and waved hello,

But the little girl was in a hurry and turned to go.


Little Poley Cub was alone the whole day,

A mystery to solve was on its way.

He wanted to know why his friend’s eyes were red,

And why nothing more was said.

He wanted to know why she turned to go,

When he said good morning and waved hello.


Soon the little girl was home again,

And Little Poley Cub was happy to see his friend.

When Mama came to tuck her in bed,

Little Poley Cub saw Mama’s eyes were also red.

She and the little girl talked but their voices were low,

What they talked about, Little Poley Cub wanted to know.


Afterwards, the little girl dressed Little Poley Cub before going to bed.

“Tomorrow, we are going to visit Papa,” she said.

Papa was alright yesterday, but then he fell.

We brought him to the hospital because he’s not well.

Mama says he will be away for some time,

I am so afraid, I don’t want Papa to die.

Little Poley Cub, if only you knew,

How I wish there was a way to talk to you.

But I have a feeling you understand,

After all, you are my best friend.”


Little Poley Cub replied, “I’m very sad, just like you.

How I wish you could hear me, too.

We live in the same place, but between us is a wall

Where on one side, Papa can get hurt and fall.

The wall I cannot see,

But when you talk to me, I can hear

The world has so many mysteries

That are bigger than you and me.

I am going to be a good detective one day,

So mysterious things I can understand and explain.

Why are you real, and why am I real,

Why is my world like a dream?

Even though you cannot hear me or see me move,

I am happy just to be here and talk to you.

I cannot die because I am not real,

But I am real because I can dream.”


Soon, the two fell asleep,

Both in their own worlds where they are free to dream.

The moon watched over them all night

Until night went away and all was bright.

Thursday, July 02, 2009

CW 210 Writing Exercise

[Note: For our first meeting in Fiction Workshop 1, we were given 20 minutes to write a story beginning/story/a couple of paragraphs based on the first sentence.]

6/25/09

When I awoke this morning, the dinosaurs were still there. They certainly gave me a lot of grief the night before, showing up at the small, one bedroom apartment that I rent, begging for scraps of food. Strictly speaking, The Regulations don't allow humans to interact with large reptilian creatures, much less give them food. Still I was faced with bug-eyed, little street urchins and I didn't have the heart to refuse.

I let them in and promised them take-out food. I ended up ordering at McDonald's, in large part due to their "No Questions Asked" policy, and ordered enough food to supply a children's party. The crew knew, of course, that a children's party/despedida worthy fastfood banquet was highly unlikely at one in the morning, but they went about their task without so much as a word of complaint. I was so puny and forlorn that they offered to deliver the food to my apartment instead.

The little ones watched me gratefully as I dumped at least fifty individually packed burger meals - double cheeseburger deluxe, the most special meal on the menu. Within minutes, all four of them were done eating, including the greasy burger wrappers and plastic cups. NowI would go hungry for the next five days.

Before dropping off to sleep, I explicitly told them to leave before daybreak, and that I didn't have the moolah to sustain their permanent need for food, shelter and affection. I thought they understood my pantomine; they certainly nodded in unison with each frantic gesture.

When I plodded out of my room, barely lucid, and found them huddled together on what was left of my couch, a random, distant melody began playing in my head and I told myself, now I have to give them names.

goodbye is under construction

[Written 28 June 2009]

the night is weary
a broken lover
is a poet,
made of glass,
fragile
but forged in fire.
she says farewell to him,
it's a parting that begs
for redemption.
he remembers her words,
turns them over and over
in his hands, like a childhood
toy discarded
and remembered,
he needs to keep himself busy now.
heartbreak to him,
is habit-forming.

points of empathy

years ago
i lived
the life
of a sponge:
porous,
absorbent
and
self-reliant
years ago
i would have
weighed
your tears
your promises
and your virtues
against my indecision
the perversion
to be needed
and loved
and be your confessor
your confidante
now i cannot
and will not
try to understand
your small cruelties

burador (rough draft)

somewhere along the way
you know there's a ride that you missed
the one that had a destination
stamped on it, the one that would
simplify things
and you'd have less to think about

somewhere along the way
there was a right turn that you didn't take
and unaided, you would stumble
in the dark
feeling friendless
and aloof

somewhere along the way
someone may have told you that there is path
that you should be on, and out of everyone else
you're the only who seems to have missed
the footfalls before you

somewhere along the way
you wonder about what is meaningful and
what is truly important
but these questions eventually lose their fire
and peter out
until they re-emerge
to lull you
briefly,
out of inertia
neither awake nor dreaming

somewhere along the way
you will hate other people for telling you
you will hate yourself for not knowing
who you are

somewhere along the way
there are days and moments and seconds
in between, and the time that it takes
between missed stops and
second chances
repeats itself ceaselessly

those are the times
you feel ageless
and unmoved

Diary (draft)

[Written 11 April 2009]

The ink has not faded,
I recognize the handwriting,
i know it is mine, determined,
i can mimic how I held the pen,
my words
still cry out with
Childish anguish
I wrote perfect poetry for you –
Sublime, fatal and unreal,
You, darkened by the sun,
Unspoiled and unrealized, poems
on a page – unsung,
Laugh lines now wound
your eyes – I presume,
I presume too much
from these memories I exhumed,
The years have gone up
In smoke, written
And re-written by my girlish hand,
Grasping at nothing:
A stubbed out cigarette
Reeks of my mistakes
– I pause, lose
the cockiness
of habit
Feeling love and hate again
In equal measure –
Unadulterated,
Uncompromised, I am
Basking in my shining idealism
Transported here, pressed
Between these pages
Unscathed and free of charge,
A decade has passed, but it does not
Resonate. I am spinning,
Tumbling down the rabbit hole,
But -

- there is a voice
on the other line, I am
in the present
again, hearing the voice
that I love – now,
I know I love,
I know love now
In this inescapable present
Where I have taken root,
With the one I love,
in this inescapable
present, I would know
him, seek him
anywhere, blind,
in the dark,

I would offer him
my imperfect poetry.

Encounter with a Married Woman

[Written/posted July 2008]


She is married, he knows

Within the first five minutes

Of their chance meeting

In this café, where these things

Usually happen. She told him this

In an almost apologetic tone,

Her face flushed, as though anticipating

That he would say, “This is no place

For people who are no longer

Alone.” His eyes are drawn

To her slender fingers

- sans ring, and that blameless face.

He tells himself, almost angrily,

“She has no business

getting married.”



They start with common interests,

This and that, really,

A bit about her husband,

A mysterious being

Extraordinary enough to woo

And win this charming creature

To give her his name

And his children.

(He imagines they are

As blameless as she is)

He wonders if she is lonely

Living in her glass house,

Attended to by porcelain servants.

His mind wanders. He remembers

His own failed relationships:

A lovely young girl

When he himself was younger.

Their romance faded:

The story of his life.

(He laughs at the thought that one day,

When he explains, at age sixty,

How he is not of marrying age.)

The memory ferments

past nostalgic intoxication:



Suddenly she rises from her seat,

And somewhere between the spaces

Of the minutes that elapsed, she must have

Gathered her things silently and neatly

From under his watch.

She is apologetic again,

The kids must be restless

But she enjoyed talking a bit.

Must you go? He says it almost

Desperately, then quickly douses

the thought, stubbing out his

cigarette. He fantasizes

that she comes to this place

Just especially to meet him.

At some other time,

It would have been enough.



Just as this new and wise woman

Vanishes from view,

He imagines being

on the same street with her

Five years ago,

Leading her away

From the throng of commuters

His arm around

Her waist.